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Ghostbusters West Coast Division: Opening Night (Now Available!)
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Veedramon
Ghosthead
Joined: Feb 03, 2003
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 Posted: Jun 15, 2003 11:44 AM
Somewhere...
I will have my revenge...
He laughed at me...said I wasn't good enough...
That I wasn't skilled enough to be part of their clique...
I will show him...
I will have my revenge...
"Are you ready, then, fleshling??? Do you accept the power--and your obligation???"
"I do, Lord Atrocity"
There was pain. Intense, exquisite pain.
Pain so intense that I should want to die.
But no.
I cannot die.
I will not die.
HE will die.
And then the pain is gone. I stand transformed.
There is deep, dark laughter.
"You have the power now. You will have your revenge. In return, you will now serve me."
"Yes, Milord."
Such power!!! I bristle with it!!! I...
Hm..okay, I don't have hands anymore, but that's a small price to pay.
"Thusly, in the name of Anubis the Lord of Death, I shall call you henceforth...the Ravisher!!!"
Ravisher...oh yeah...I like it. The Ravisher.
"Go, my servant. Have your revenge...and then we'll talk..."
Uh-oh.
With a guy like this making trouble, Who Ya Gonna Call?
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Um, but they're three thousand miles away.
(cue Ghostbusters theme. Neon orange Ghostbuster logo appears)
Dr. Joey Williams...
"Please, no applause"
Dr. Kyle Stevens...
"Doctor Stevens reporting for duty"
Dr. Andrew Harness...
"It's all fun and games until someone loses an eye to a proton stream.... Then it's hilarious."
Dr. Fritz Baugh...
"You rammed a troll at a Wal-Mart? Are you medicated?"
Peter Kong...
"Let's Go Ghostbusters!!! Sorry, couldn't resist."
Micheal Chad...
"Chillax. Mister Clutch is on the scene!"
Dr. Micheal Camy...
"Now that's a configuration of body parts not approved by the AMA"
Jeremy Hicks...
"Ahh, there's nothing like the sound of an unlicensed nuclear accelerator in the morning."
John Lipsyte...
"Ghostbusters Forever!!!"
and Dr. Robert Griffiths
"I'm thrown in with a bunch of bloody lunatics."
GHOSTBUSTERS WEST COAST DIVISION
The new Legends of Ghostbusters are here!!!
also featuring Dr. Nathaniel "Otter" Masterson
"Do these parachute pants make me look sexy, or what?"
"Opening Night". Now playing on a GBN fan fic board near you
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--Dr. Fritz V. Baugh, Mad Scientist and Official Historian of Ghostbusters: West Coast Division
Also known as GBCentral's Doc Fritz
Visit The Digibusters Ectozone, home of the Ghostbusters Omnibus Timeline!!!!! and the New Ghostbusters Timeline!. The Ectozone is a member of the GB Community Board
Also visit The Ghostbusters Fact List!
And read one of my Fan Fictions Pretty Please?
Egon and Janine Forever!!!
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Sinister
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 05, 2002
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Posted: Jun 15, 2003 5:29 PM
Bravo!
Oops...
No applause... sorry.
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The resident scribe for GHOSTBUSTERS UK
GB DOOMSdAY, a crossover event unlike any other!
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Ghostbuster-x
Ghosthead
Joined: Sep 24, 2002
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Posted: Jun 15, 2003 5:54 PM
Veedramon This sounds really cool, as you may know Sinister writes the fan fics for GBUK, looking forward to it, but this should really be in the fan fic section.
Thanks
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We're Back In Business Ghostbusters-UK
Nintendo-Gamecube
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Kingpin
Ghosthead
Joined: Aug 17, 2001
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Posted: Jun 15, 2003 6:41 PM
Very cool Fritz, looking forward to it.
"I've been thrown in with a bunch of bloody lunatics."
Heh, sweet 
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"We have the tools, we have the talent"
The sun never sets on the British Empire...because God can't trust us in the dark! evil grin
Nightsquad gets chatting
Egon and Janine forever! Everything else is wrong
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Otter
Ghosthead
Joined: Jan 03, 2003
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Posted: Jun 15, 2003 9:15 PM
Very good Veedramon. You captured the essence of ever character very well!
-congradulatory, Otter
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"Denial is always the first step, unless, of course, you didn't do it." -Otter
"God must have loved the common man since He made so many!" -Abraham Lincoln
Ghostbusters: West Coast Division
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Ludicris
Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 12, 2002
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Posted: Jun 15, 2003 10:15 PM
Especially otter's character.  I love that line.
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please, no applause.
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Otter
Ghosthead
Joined: Jan 03, 2003
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Posted: Jun 15, 2003 10:31 PM
I can just see my character saying that in the body of Mr. Furly!
-comparing, Otter
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"Denial is always the first step, unless, of course, you didn't do it." -Otter
"God must have loved the common man since He made so many!" -Abraham Lincoln
Ghostbusters: West Coast Division
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SpecterHarness
Ghosthead
Joined: Sep 12, 2002
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Posted: Jun 16, 2003 12:40 AM
Sounds great!
But the troll was outside, we rammed its @$$ into the far wall with the truck. Sorry but that quote sounded like we rammed it while we were INSIDE Wal-Mart.
And no, I'm not medicated, I hope.... LOL
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I would explain it to you, but your brain would EXPLODE.
Welcome to the Coast with the Most!
Visit the ETGB at www.EastTNGhostbusters.tk
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Doc Ryedale
Ghosthead
Joined: Nov 02, 2002
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Posted: Jun 16, 2003 1:21 AM
Be there, or be square!  
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"We're on a mission from God!"
"Hey, do you believe in God? Well I do. Praise the Lord and pass the Particle Throwers! I love Jesus' style. . . "
"Back off, man, I'ma Genealogist!"
They don�t just call them The Real Ghostbusters for no reason! Take a look at Take Two, Citizen Ghost, The Ghostbusters Omnibus Timeline, THE GHOSTBUSTERS FACT LIST, and RGB Truly Canon with the Movies?, and you�ll see why!
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kyleogb1983
Moderator
Joined: Jun 16, 2002
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Posted: Jun 16, 2003 4:38 AM
Veedramon, I can't tell you enough about how awesome this is going to be. And the fact is that you displayed my chactervery well the " Dr. Stevens reporting for duty" thing will be my trade.
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Kyleogb1983, The Southern Gentleman of GBN.
" If there's a haunting in the West, you can call the Best. Ghostbusters: West Coast Division"
" Did someone call for a Doctor ?"
" Dr. Stevens, reporting for duty, Sir."
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Agent D
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 09, 2002
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Posted: Jun 16, 2003 11:24 PM
I've been waiting for this. Good luck, guys!
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Ghostbusters N.O.M.A.D. House Sitter
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"Howdy, Vakesh! Meet Winona!"
*smack*
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Ludicris
Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 12, 2002
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Posted: Jun 17, 2003 4:37 PM
thanks agent d. I hope everyone enjoys it.
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please, no applause.
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Proton_User
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 24, 2002
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Posted: Jun 17, 2003 6:44 PM
i love it and that line is definetly me!
very north western England!!
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we nuke the spooks that won't stay dead...We stop things going Bump in the night...We are Ghostbusters:West Coast Division
"i can either be insane or Eccentric its your call... but i have to be rich to be eccentric so that makes me insane!" - DR Robert Griffiths
"I'm thrown in with a bunch of bloody lunatics." - DR Robert Griffiths
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GB:west division NEWS thread
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Ludicris
Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 12, 2002
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Posted: Jun 19, 2003 1:44 AM
Veedramon completed the first draft of opening night part 1 and it is unbelievable. I know everyone is going to enjoy it fully and want to read it again and again. Great job on the first draft veedramon
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kyleogb1983
Moderator
Joined: Jun 16, 2002
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Posted: Jun 21, 2003 4:49 AM
We're coming, folks. Veedramon, awesome awesome job. I enjoyed reading it and I like what you've did with the Ravisher, very well thought of, and we're be in the fan fiction world as soon as we know it.
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Kyleogb1983, The Southern Gentleman of GBN.
" If there's a haunting in the West, you can call the Best. Ghostbusters: West Coast Division"
" Did someone call for a Doctor ?"
" Dr. Stevens, reporting for duty, Sir."
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Ludicris
Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 12, 2002
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Posted: Jun 24, 2003 11:55 PM
Hello all.
Since joining the team, Veedramon, has accomplished basically the un-accomplishable (if thats even a word). Knowing how much time veedramon has given to the team, he deserves much more than a thank you and the head-writer position, but Veedramon didnt expect to be offered the position as head-writer, he did this for the good of the team and to make us look the most proffessional as possible and he certainly did that. He will be having the first part of opening night part 1 up shortly, though ill let him anounce when, since it is his baby (for lack of better words) Ive read it and its phenomenal and I know everyone will love it. Veedramon, great work buddy and thanks for contributing so much to the team. You truly are amazing.
Thanks.
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please, no applause.
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