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Otter
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Joined: Jan 03, 2003
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 Posted: Jul 04, 2003 3:00 PM
Peter - I will resend my story to all after I finish with Chapter 2. It consists of the trio (Joey, Nathaniel, and Fritz) reaching HQ and learning of a disturbance. Again, everyone on the team is involved in this story.
V - Please dont hold back on suggestions. Im not sensitive. I would like to make this as good as possible.
If anyone is going to draw our HQ, I suggest Ludicris should. He seems to have the best idea of our interior (since he came up with the original idea). Im sure he will be open to any suggestons though.
I have found a site with a map of the LA area. I suggest all look at this site:
http://www.mapquest.com/maps/map.adp?country=US&address=&city=Los+Angeles&state=CA
It is from Map Quest. You can zoom in/out around the area. I hope this helps.
-eating Potato Sticks, Otter
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"Denial is always the first step, unless, of course, you didn't do it." -Otter
"God must have loved the common man since He made so many!" -Abraham Lincoln
Ghostbusters: West Coast Division
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kyleogb1983
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Joined: Jun 16, 2002
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Posted: Jul 04, 2003 6:37 PM
Veedramon, I woudl be happy to happy ch.3 or ch. 4 , which ever how chatpers you have for the story and I'll be happy to do so.
Well, I'm off to Atlanta today, I'll see you fellas around. Have fun, guys, and I'll write on my story so more aswell.
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Kyleogb1983, The Southern Gentleman of GBN.
" If there's a haunting in the West, you can call the Best. Ghostbusters: West Coast Division"
" Did someone call for a Doctor ?"
" Dr. Stevens, reporting for duty, Sir."
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Veedramon
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Joined: Feb 03, 2003
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Posted: Jul 04, 2003 7:34 PM
Kyle: as you're busy and about to be out of town, I might do SOME work on it (I might suggest parts of it anyway). I'll try and get a basic outline of what I see happening in it to you soon. I've just got a couple of Original Ghostbusters stories I'm hoping to fine-tune, and may be doing that for the next week or so, so if Kyle can do at least SOME work on Part Three, it'd be helpful.
Similarly, Part Four should feature the recruitment drive and the premiere of the rest of the cast (Andy, Robert, Chad, John Lipsyte), so if Andy has any ideas for his character's introduction I'm all ears (He sent me a brief story once before, but it was built around the "Dr. Harness as Angry and Disabled" concept of the time). Maybe Venkman shows up right after the ETGB boys get done busting ghost moonshiners or something...Idunno...
Peter's suggestion of a GBWC Story Chronology is a good one, and I just finished creating one HERE. It will be updated as necessary. Note to Andy: there was a glitch in the process that created an untitled thread that needs to be deleted. Thanks.
But here's the Big News:
The draft of "Opening Night, Part Two" is done, and will be showing up in the mailboxes I have addresses for shortly. (I didn't see Proton User's address on that list a few months ago--is the address in his posts current? I'd like confirmation on that if possible)
EDIT: I also need confirmation on Chadderbox and Ray Parker Jr's email addresses. It keeps coming back "error" when I include those two (everyone else should have theirs by now)
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--Dr. Fritz V. Baugh, Mad Scientist and Official Historian of Ghostbusters: West Coast Division
Also known as GBCentral's Doc Fritz
Visit The Digibusters Ectozone, home of the Ghostbusters Omnibus Timeline!!!!! and the New Ghostbusters Timeline!. The Ectozone is a member of the GB Community Board
Also visit The Ghostbusters Fact List!
And read one of my Fan Fictions Pretty Please?
Egon and Janine Forever!!!
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Peter Kong
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Joined: Mar 10, 2002
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Posted: Jul 05, 2003 2:00 AM
My fanfic has been sent to everyone except Im Still Single since I couldn't find his address (and he even appears in the story).
Let me know if you didn't get one because of e-mail issues and also give me tips on approving it or suggestions, etc. One key factor I'm concerned with is how I wrote each individual member's character. For those that didn't appear in this part may or will make an appearance or at least mentioned in either part 2 or 3. (For example, the guys need Otter's help for something in part 2)
Also, I need Im Still Single's e-mail so I can send him the story.
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"Heeeeeeeeeeeeeey kiiiiiiiiiiiiiids!" - Binky the Clown
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Peter Kong
Ghosthead
Joined: Mar 10, 2002
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Posted: Jul 05, 2003 10:14 AM
When I click on HERE. It takes me to "cannot load" page. Do you have the right URL on the link?
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"Heeeeeeeeeeeeeey kiiiiiiiiiiiiiids!" - Binky the Clown
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Kingpin
Ghosthead
Joined: Aug 17, 2001
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Posted: Jul 05, 2003 10:22 AM
Impressive work Fritz, your weaving facts into the storyline is impressive as always. Can't wait to see what the rest of the team churns out.
Oh, and Venkman's smooth talking Ravisher was definatley down to a T.
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"We have the tools, we have the talent"
The sun never sets on the British Empire...because God can't trust us in the dark! evil grin
Nightsquad gets chatting
Egon and Janine forever! Everything else is wrong
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Ludicris
Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 12, 2002
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Posted: Jul 05, 2003 11:42 AM
Hello all.
GHOSTBUSTERS WEST COAST DIVISION CONTACT SHEET:
GHOSTBUSTERS: WEST COAST DIVISION MEMBERS
NORTHERN SUBDIVISION:
1)DR. JOEY WILLIAMS
aim screen name: Ludicris00001
email address: [email protected]
2)DR. FRITZ BAUGH
aim screen name: Doctor Weird 67
email address: [email protected]
3)LEON HOGAN
aim screen name: Slimms 98
email address: [email protected]
4)ROBERT JOHN GRIFFITHS
aim screen name: RoBRULZTheworld
email address: [email protected]
5)JEREMY
aim screen name: none known
email address: [email protected]
ENGINEERING CAPTAIN:
6)DR.NATHANIEL "OTTER" MASTERSON:
aim screen name: Weird Beaver
email address: [email protected]
SOUTHERN SUBDIVISION:
1)DR. ANDY HARNESS:
aim screen name: SpecterHarness
email address: [email protected]
2)DR. KYLE STEVENS:
aim screen name: KyleStevens8383
email address: [email protected]
3)DR. MICHAEL A. CHAD (AKA CHAD)
aim screen name: mikechadj4
email address: [email protected]
4)PETER KONG:
aim screen name: stantzfield
email address: [email protected]
5)MICHAEL N. CAMY
aim screen name: jiggsatdale
email address: none known
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If any members emails will change or have changed, let me know and Ill update that asap. By they way, I will be sending this to every member so you can save it and not have to worry about coming back to this exact page.
GHOSTBUSTERS HQ LAY OUT:
I have already begun a lay out of our hq by floors. Everything will be blocked out, though there will not be detailed pictures of everything in the hq.
GHOSTBUSTERS ART:
I have been continuing to draw our team and equipment constantly (though, sometimes having to go back and change them a bit). I know its difficult waiting since I dont have a scanner and I have to mooch off my friend to scan our pics and email it to myself. Though, not to worry, everythings been coming fine and theyll be up in the next week. I have been very busy, finishing up one of our fan fics and with work, but not to worry. The pics will arrive.
Veedramon - Is it possible for you to be on aim tonight around ten, so I can send you my fic through the direct connecting of certain documents and what have you?
Thanks.
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please, no applause.
Ghostbusters: West Coast Division
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SpecterHarness
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Joined: Sep 12, 2002
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Posted: Jul 05, 2003 2:22 PM
The ETGB did the direct link to stories and what-not. So I think that's a great idea.
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I would explain it to you, but your brain would EXPLODE.
Welcome to the Coast with the Most!
Visit the ETGB at www.EastTNGhostbusters.tk
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SpecterHarness
Ghosthead
Joined: Sep 12, 2002
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Posted: Jul 05, 2003 2:40 PM
I'll take care of that dead thread, thanks for the info, Vee.
And here is how I see my character entering. I like the idea of the moonshiners and I'd love to incorporate your little catch phrase into the story "You rammed a troll..."
Peter Venkman sees a news article on "ETGB saves the south" or something like that due to the first capture of Ashram a year earlier. He comes to Tennessee to find the WHOLE ETGB and transfer them to the West Coast due to the decline in supernatural activity after the Bell Witch was caught. The containment unit breaks down (due to a now mutating Ashram) and all the ghosts break loose. The others stay behind to take care of the ghosts that have put the ETGB back in business. Ashram is nowhere to be seen, so Dr. Harness accepts the paid vacation to LA. (where ashram immediately follows)
Note: This could be our first crossover as well. and i'd like to meet "Rover" (ravisher's nickname by dr. harness)
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I would explain it to you, but your brain would EXPLODE.
Welcome to the Coast with the Most!
Visit the ETGB at www.EastTNGhostbusters.tk
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SpecterHarness
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Joined: Sep 12, 2002
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Posted: Jul 05, 2003 3:04 PM
I found our base area. It's a clear spot on Vista Del Mar Highland Ave.
It's the closest road to the water area on the left. It intercepts with Rosecrans Ave to go right into the heart of LA.
I was thinking if our base is North of 45th street on VDMHA, we can serve the area more effeciently and make room for our hawaii division (if we have one like Dr. Belmont suggested)
and it's right next to manhattan park (kinda fitting for a gb franchise)
plus it's connects to main roads so we can go to Century City and Beverly Hills and other places without a major traffic jam.
(feeling stupid for no good reason and mocking otter) Doc Harness
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I would explain it to you, but your brain would EXPLODE.
Welcome to the Coast with the Most!
Visit the ETGB at www.EastTNGhostbusters.tk
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Otter
Ghosthead
Joined: Jan 03, 2003
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Posted: Jul 05, 2003 3:56 PM
All suggestions for Chapter II have been changed. I am hoping to send a copy of Chapter III out, after I have done writting it.
Major changes have been made to make chapter I's flashback non-existant. It will now occur in shared dialog in Chapter III, after the rest of North Division returns to HQ.
I am also expecting the prologue and Chapters I-III to be a Part One of GBWC: Russian Roulette
I also have news. Since Im Still Single has not posted for about 45 pages, I am under the assumption that he is no longer interested in this project. Because of this, I cannot write him into my story. I have no way of learning more about his character.
-feeling special about starting a trend, Otter
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"Denial is always the first step, unless, of course, you didn't do it." -Otter
"God must have loved the common man since He made so many!" -Abraham Lincoln
Ghostbusters: West Coast Division
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