venky - Tue Jun 10 8:53 PM PSD
it blew me away! very creative

LordVego - Sun Feb 16 6:00 PM PSD
dude, thaT is so cool, when will you finish it?

Sinister - Sun Feb 9 4:58 PM PSD
Cool way of getting them into business.

Peter Kong - Tue Jan 28 9:10 PM PSD
Very good setting and story. Just a few mistakes in the writing, but doesn't spoil anything.

Twister - Tue Jan 28 8:28 PM PSD
Twister likes!!!! Considering I read it before you submitted, but that's beside the point...

coachmcbribe - Mon Jan 27 7:59 PM PSD
Well done.Very well done.The highest mark i have ever given for a fan fiction.Bringing in new characters aswell as keeping the old, and dialouge and scenes extremely imaganble, ill make sure i read the next part.

TedFleming - Sun Jan 26 10:46 PM PSD
I like it! I hope the original gb show somewhere

Wayne W. - Sun Jan 26 10:38 PM PSD
Awesome man, can't wait to read the sequal

GB Freak - Sun Jan 26 11:32 AM PSD
Wait until the second part, it will be getting much better.