GB Freak - Wed Dec 25 10:29 PM PSD
not bad. . .It's GREAT! I really loved this sotry.

Texasgb - Sat Dec 21 3:13 PM PSD
Not bad.Could use some more content.

Dr. Spengler - Sun Nov 17 3:40 AM PSD
Not bad. Abrupt and somewhat predictable ending. Quite short. A longer, more mysterious, mystery type story would have fit better with this one. The GBs solved this one too quick and with too much ease. I guess that's how it is sometimes, though.

LordVego - Sat Nov 16 10:47 PM PSD
ah! another great from the fabulous Tweestah!! we should have story time together one day lol u make the best ones

Dr. Loomis - Sat Nov 16 6:11 PM PSD
I LIKE IT, I LIKE IT!!!

Agent D - Tue Nov 12 8:01 PM PSD
Hurray, another story from Twister! It was just a tad predictable and the ending was a bit abrupt, but still fun to read. Good job, Twister.

Kingpin - Tue Nov 12 9:57 AM PSD
A little short on the end but otherwise good.