Kingdom_Hearts - Mon Jun 16 5:12 PM PSD
the best

Wayne W. - Wed Mar 19 7:37 AM PSD
what the hell was that? ;)

Dr. Seward - Sat Dec 14 11:34 AM PSD
This was disgusting to read. "Mature" is NOT the word I would use to describe this atrocity. Kids tend to throw this word around alot, covering childish perversion with literature for an older crowd.

samuraijackGB - Wed Oct 2 3:38 AM PSD
YO ROCK!!!

Twister - Thu Sep 26 7:34 PM PSD
It is rather sad, but you need to cut down the graphic stuff.

Agent D - Thu Sep 26 6:09 PM PSD
I'm going to have to side with Vince. The language is sickening. The content is disgusting and pointless. The story didn't hold my attention. I'm only giving it a two because of good paragraph structure.

darknevermore - Thu Sep 26 5:29 AM PSD
Sure, the language is a bit hard, but I overlooked it, and found an interesting story arch, with an new interesting character. Maybe the language can be edited for everyone to enjoy? I don't think it would compromise the character any, in my opinion.

Vincent Belmont - Thu Sep 26 2:50 AM PSD
I didn't get beyond the 6th paragraph! This is terrible and distasteful! I am shocked that Chad even approved of it. NONE of the material in here is remotelty appropriate for this site. This had better NOT continue.

PeterVenkmanFan - Fri Sep 20 4:22 PM PSD
Over all this 3 parter fanfic was very interesting and not like the conventional fanfic. I thought it was great!