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Penguin King - Sun Feb 9 3:59 PM PSD
the "tiger ghost" could just another form the "bus ghost" took thus conecting them. still you need to give us more so we can judge fairly.
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peter bo - Sun Dec 8 3:06 PM PSD
An improvement on Chapter 1, but not by much. I would have given it an 8 if you had kept Peter alive, and this chapter didn't really follow on from Chapter 1.
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Zack - Wed Oct 30 2:06 AM PSD
What a shitty way to go...what sucks more than dying? Venkman dying..by tiger no less
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NxtGhostbuster - Wed Oct 9 10:37 PM PSD
I Don't like your discription of Egon being a slob, and I don't like the part when Peter Dies..
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johnbrown - Wed Jul 17 10:10 AM PSD
One: This story isn't connected w/ Chapter 1. Two: I hate the idea of Venkman, my favorite character, dying.
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Dr. Spengler - Mon Jul 15 8:52 AM PSD
This story is a better one than the first installment, though still has no connection to the first and if the series isn't continued, then the story won't work. A 7 for the effort, and from what I rated on the first story - you have potential.
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Ecto-1Archie - Wed Jun 19 4:00 AM PSD
the tiger was a stupid idea and this has nothing to do with hell or the first instalment of ghostbusters enter hell?
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Mr.Staypuft - Tue Jun 11 2:41 PM PSD
Better but i still dont like the idea of venkmen dieing
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awhitefire - Wed Apr 3 6:37 PM PSD
I like my RGB "Peter Venkman, in Hell" story better than this one, but nevertheless I have to give Maverick his due because he clearly had this idea first. Long before I decided to write PViH last month. Hat's off to you, and good luck.
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Ghostbuster4evr - Tue Mar 5 10:35 AM PSD
Great fanfic; maybe there should be a series of novels like it.
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Mario - Sun Feb 10 7:06 PM PSD
Much better, great cliffhanger.
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creed - Tue Jan 29 7:13 PM PSD
that was much better then the 1st your really good at this
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Glycerine - Sat Jan 12 10:59 AM PSD
Interesting story..
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deadderek - Tue Dec 18 9:16 AM PSD
Much better than the first one. It was realistic and exciting. I think it was sad Maverick gave his story a ten though.
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Maverick - Sat Dec 8 10:26 PM PSD
Wow! I'm such a good writer!
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