Penguin King - Sun Feb 9 3:54 PM PSD
seems like it could have potential as a setup to a story, try and write more of it at once so when can see what you're doing

Vincent Belmont - Sat Dec 14 10:19 AM PSD
It was in the title, Zack.

peter bo - Sun Dec 8 2:57 PM PSD
Good, but too short. The Ghostbusters weren't even in it at all, but i'll be fair because i thought it was okay.

Zack - Wed Oct 30 2:04 AM PSD
I couldn't find the word ghost in it at all :(

SpecterHarness - Sun Oct 27 2:09 PM PSD
Dude, If you want to stay on this planet, you have to speak our language.

Dr. Spengler - Mon Jul 15 8:49 AM PSD
I decided to read the next installment before I rated the first, and I must say I'm displeased. Unless you plan to continue this series, the stories have no connection. A six for the effort - you have potential.

Mr.Staypuft - Tue Jun 11 2:37 PM PSD
Thet was sad and had nothing to do with anything

awhitefire - Wed Apr 3 6:43 PM PSD
Not bad, but man, you like to write short, don't you? I give this one a 7 because it's part of a story that (I hope) will be much bigger and better than it started out. Also, see my review for Chapter 2.

Akuma - Sun Mar 3 8:01 PM PSD
Could be much better.

Master Spider - Sun Feb 17 11:31 AM PSD
Not bad...hopefully it'll lead up to something more exciting...

Mario - Sun Feb 10 7:04 PM PSD
I didn't get it.

Glycerine - Sat Feb 9 1:48 PM PSD
It's ok.. Not the best at this point, but since it's only chapter 1 I'm guessing it's leading up to something..

bigpapi428 - Thu Jan 31 6:24 PM PSD
pretty good

Mary Spengler - Fri Dec 21 8:17 AM PSD
I tink you can do better stories than this...

deadderek - Tue Dec 18 9:11 AM PSD
I think the story is O.K.,not the best,but not the worst.