dontforgetbttf1 - Fri Jun 20 4:04 AM PSD
He tried.

Slimer1288 - Wed Apr 23 8:10 PM PSD
if there was a zero as a selection i would have picked it. Your story was way too short and made no sense!!!!!

CaptainN - Sat Apr 19 7:20 PM PSD
Had good potential, but with it being really really short, and no plot at all it made me feel like I wasted time reading it.

GhostBustersIV - Sat Mar 29 5:08 AM PSD
Very short, and lot's of spelling errors.

SolidAsSnake - Tue Mar 11 10:42 PM PSD
I agree with the other reviews on this one

LordVego - Mon Feb 24 5:35 PM PSD
pure genius! great story!

Egon 13 - Mon Feb 10 3:26 AM PSD
Where's the beef?

peter bo - Sun Feb 9 7:55 AM PSD
Sorry, but that was just short and pointless. There were some good lines out of the few that were in it but it seriously could have been done a lot better!

Vincent Belmont - Sun Feb 9 2:20 AM PSD
I found this to be way too short. It struck me as superflous and pointless. No plot is established, nothing was done. Is this a teaser? Is there more? What? If this is the best of this story, I don't even WANT to read the rest.