peter bo - Thu Dec 5 1:36 PM PSD
Pretty good. Once again, i really like the mystery, but we need to hear from Winston aswell as the other guys.

Vincent Belmont - Sun Nov 24 9:13 AM PSD
Very good work. I don't quite concur with diehard, but it was very entertaining nonetheless.

diehard485 - Fri Nov 15 7:59 PM PSD
Awesome, awesome story. I wish I could write like that, I hope to read the upcoming chapters. Keep up that great work, your writing style is matched by only the greatest such as Crichton or King.

Kingpin - Tue Nov 12 7:44 AM PSD
Well written, keep writing new parts for this story

NxtGhostbuster - Mon Nov 11 11:51 PM PSD
That was great. Keep writing. Sad to seem, but your stories are the best!

egon_rulez - Fri Nov 8 1:08 PM PSD
again, a wonderful masterpiece!!!! I wish i could write this good ;_;