Jackalman 99 - Sat May 17 4:31 PM PSD
2 soon to tell. Good luck.

Kingpin - Fri Aug 9 5:34 PM PSD
good story so far

PF4Eva - Wed Jul 17 7:03 PM PSD
That was amazing so far! I would have given you an 11 for the gothic girl, but I can't.

spookbuster - Thu Jul 11 11:00 AM PSD
I think it's good so far, well written, can't wait to see it finished.

ecto18 - Wed Jul 10 1:59 PM PSD
cool

Dr. Spengler - Sat Jul 6 10:11 PM PSD
A very good and interesting start. I am eager to see what happens next. I hope you continue it.

Biggsexi - Mon Jul 1 4:02 PM PSD
i liked it.. although short it makes you wonder

9sam1 - Sun Jun 30 10:03 AM PSD
this is bad nothing to do with ghostbusters you should at the end of part 1 have a ghost..

Ecto-1Archie - Wed Jun 19 4:04 AM PSD
no explainaiton

Master Spider - Mon May 13 7:07 PM PSD
Part II will definately be sweet...

Dave Starkey - Mon May 6 10:33 AM PSD
This is a cool one, in my opinion. Makes you wonder who the next generation will be.

Twister - Sun May 5 11:18 AM PSD
Cool!!!!

Egon-Ecto1a - Sun May 5 8:14 AM PSD
I love it!