Jackalman 99 - Thu May 22 2:48 PM PSD
That's all it deserves for now. You ff authors, actually make the ghosts kill their victims, making more realism in the plot, something neither toon version had the nerve to do. That's to you're credit.

J.C - Fri Jul 5 2:25 PM PSD
It's not that bad!

kyleogb1983 - Fri Jul 5 4:03 AM PSD
thsiwas too short i mean i thought it was good but what was the point of the Grundel killing the boy ??

Ghostbuster4evr - Wed Mar 20 8:30 AM PSD
A nice little short story; if only Stephen King could do something like this.

Maria - Tue Feb 26 8:05 AM PSD
Hmph..

daneghostbuster - Sun Feb 24 11:40 PM PSD
It really didnt seem to have much point. The story didnt really go anywhere and it seems just too dark.

Mary Spengler - Fri Feb 22 12:30 PM PSD
Um.. Well, its O.K story!

Zebrapix - Mon Feb 18 12:59 PM PSD
Way dark for a Ghostbusters story, but I like the imagery. Stephen King meets Ghosbusters.

Mario - Sun Feb 17 11:32 PM PSD
Good start, but I hate the Grundel.