MuthaPussBucket - Thu Mar 13 3:18 AM PSD
Good good, Spidey's dialouge worked quite well. The only reason I didn't give you a ten was because Spidey's spider-sense didn't warn him of Jason going to attack. Even if he still hit him, it's important to remember the spider sense keeps him alive.

peter bo - Sat Feb 15 8:10 AM PSD
There could have been more of Ray, but the action in this was brilliant. You definetly deserved this 10!

Agent D - Tue Oct 15 8:53 PM PSD
Wow, that was awesome! You nailed Spidey's dialogue! Loved the ending too.

LordVego - Sat Sep 14 9:59 AM PSD
Come on, keep pumpin them out

Kingpin - Tue Aug 6 5:20 PM PSD
Like the story so far, can't wait for the next part.

deadderek - Fri Jul 26 4:40 PM PSD
Are you a god?

Dr. Spengler - Wed Jun 26 10:54 PM PSD
Very good story, keep it up, you have something awesome here!

Proton_Pack - Fri Jun 21 1:29 AM PSD
nice like the crossover!

Biggsexi - Fri Jun 7 4:04 PM PSD
Very good work.. you could go far with this..

Boo's Nightmare - Sun May 19 10:57 PM PSD
Exceptional, just like the other three parts. Can't wait for the next ones!

Akuma - Sat Mar 16 6:28 AM PSD
Great.

Bo Holbrook - Sat Mar 9 1:57 AM PSD
Praise this story

JESUSFREAK - Thu Feb 28 4:48 PM PSD
More!

Vincent Belmont - Mon Feb 18 5:20 AM PSD
This is good work. It's well written, and contains enough detail to hold attention. I give it a solid A.

Jay_Tigran - Sun Feb 17 8:36 AM PSD
More...I want more!!!

Master Spider - Sat Feb 16 10:23 PM PSD
Man, I'm lovin' this series. Let's see how it finishes. I'm pullin' for Spidey!

Mario - Sat Feb 16 5:53 PM PSD
Great to read about Jason beating someone to an eventual bloody mess.