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MuthaPussBucket - Thu Mar 13 3:18 AM PSD Good good, Spidey's dialouge worked quite well. The only reason I didn't give you a ten was because Spidey's spider-sense didn't warn him of Jason going to attack. Even if he still hit him, it's important to remember the spider sense keeps him alive.
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peter bo - Sat Feb 15 8:10 AM PSD There could have been more of Ray, but the action in this was brilliant. You definetly deserved this 10!
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Agent D - Tue Oct 15 8:53 PM PSD Wow, that was awesome! You nailed Spidey's dialogue! Loved the ending too.
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LordVego - Sat Sep 14 9:59 AM PSD Come on, keep pumpin them out
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Kingpin - Tue Aug 6 5:20 PM PSD Like the story so far, can't wait for the next part.
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deadderek - Fri Jul 26 4:40 PM PSD Are you a god?
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Dr. Spengler - Wed Jun 26 10:54 PM PSD Very good story, keep it up, you have something awesome here!
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Proton_Pack - Fri Jun 21 1:29 AM PSD nice like the crossover!
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Biggsexi - Fri Jun 7 4:04 PM PSD Very good work.. you could go far with this..
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Boo's Nightmare - Sun May 19 10:57 PM PSD Exceptional, just like the other three parts. Can't wait for the next ones!
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Akuma - Sat Mar 16 6:28 AM PSD Great.
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Bo Holbrook - Sat Mar 9 1:57 AM PSD Praise this story
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JESUSFREAK - Thu Feb 28 4:48 PM PSD More!
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Vincent Belmont - Mon Feb 18 5:20 AM PSD This is good work. It's well written, and contains enough detail to hold attention. I give it a solid A.
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Jay_Tigran - Sun Feb 17 8:36 AM PSD More...I want more!!!
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Master Spider - Sat Feb 16 10:23 PM PSD Man, I'm lovin' this series. Let's see how it finishes. I'm pullin' for Spidey!
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Mario - Sat Feb 16 5:53 PM PSD Great to read about Jason beating someone to an eventual bloody mess.
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