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mrshowtime3740 - Tue Jul 1 7:16 PM PSD
LLLAAAAMMMMEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Dr. Seward - Sat Dec 14 11:38 AM PSD
Sorry. I just didn't like this one. I know it's fanfiction, but it was just too fargone.
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peter bo - Sun Dec 8 2:49 PM PSD
It was okay. Could have been better, but I've still to read Chapter 2.
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Zack - Tue Nov 12 5:06 PM PSD
not bad, not bad :)
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NxtGhostbuster - Tue Oct 29 2:22 PM PSD
Ok, except the grammer mistakes and jumping around.
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Kingpin - Fri Aug 9 5:00 PM PSD
cool so far!
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Egon 13 - Fri Aug 2 2:41 AM PSD
Just slightly above really bad.
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clareblues - Tue Jul 23 12:01 PM PSD
Nice one!! Hurry up with part 2!!
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kyleogb1983 - Thu Jul 18 11:48 AM PSD
Good story Indded, Ms. Mary Spengler.
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Biggsexi - Fri Jul 5 1:50 PM PSD
great Story.. i was expecting Michael Myers to make an apperance with that title..
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GBSlimer87 - Thu Jun 20 8:16 PM PSD
kool story!!
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I Luv EgonS - Fri Jun 7 3:58 PM PSD
nice story!
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Twister - Tue Apr 16 9:06 PM PSD
Cool Story!
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Ectodudes Lover - Thu Mar 14 8:23 AM PSD
I love this story!! It remembers me about me & Ectodude!!
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MasamaBinLaden - Thu Mar 7 9:58 AM PSD
I love your story, I am going to read it again!!! :)
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Egon15 - Fri Mar 1 5:15 PM PSD
Zachjb and Jay are right, you've got grammatical errors coming out of your ears!! You might want to proofread Chapter 2 a little bit more when you submit it.
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zachjb - Wed Feb 27 3:26 PM PSD
I agree with Jay. Story does drag a little and the grammatical errors are too much to just let go.
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Maria - Mon Feb 25 12:18 PM PSD
Hmph.. Something is missing in this story, but the Egon/Carol thigs R.O.C.K!!
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Jay_Tigran - Wed Feb 20 8:29 PM PSD
Story tends to drag, along with past/present writing style...
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Master Spider - Fri Feb 15 10:49 PM PSD
Lay off Vincent guys, Mary gave his fanfics 1's for no good reason. She didn't give a good reason, at least. I liked it, but I think it could've been a little more exciting.
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Ghostress - Fri Feb 15 12:15 PM PSD
You guys are right!!!Vincent is totally dickless!!By the way, your story was really good!
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Mario - Fri Feb 15 12:52 AM PSD
Vincent Obviously having problems, I think the author is building up to something.
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Zebrapix - Thu Feb 14 12:39 AM PSD
A Good Story Deserves a Fair Rating. Real rating 8, but I wish I could erase what dickless down there did with a 15, Where's Chapter 2?
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Mary Spengler - Wed Feb 13 1:26 PM PSD
Vincent; you suck! By the way, what did you to Mario?
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Vincent Belmont - Wed Feb 13 10:48 AM PSD
I think your fanfic is fine. I'm just returning the favor.
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