Peter Kong - Thu Jun 12 7:56 PM PSD
Very good story and great detail.

Doc Ryedale - Sun Jun 1 10:07 PM PSD
This was truly a great story. I'm one of the "Egon & Janine Forever!" Ghostheads. I couldn't help but feel sorry for Janine and Louis making that mistake. Now we know half of the answer to the question of "Where's Louis?".

AllHailEgon - Sun Jun 1 2:55 AM PSD
This rules!! It may lack busting, but it makes up with its spectacular writing and drama (which any fan fic needs)

Kingpin - Sun May 25 8:10 PM PSD
Jackalman, stop nitpicking. Veedramon, this was a well written and well structured story, well done.

egb fan - Sun May 25 8:19 AM PSD
Excellent. So intricately woven you could unpick it for an A level exam! (Sorry, exams on the brain.) Too bad nothing ever came of it on the show.

Jackalman 99 - Mon May 19 2:00 PM PSD
I liked your fic. But, I watched the ep, it said she had been ingaged once, not to whom and NOT married to anyone ever. Not too bad as far as fics go.

Twister - Sun May 18 8:26 PM PSD
Really good..kinda gives you a hint at what happened between RGB and EGB

Sinister - Sat May 17 9:50 PM PSD
Excellent work mon! It really explains why Louis was no longer on the scene.

NeoMyers - Sat May 17 9:21 PM PSD
Great story! I loved the Janine POV and you write very well. It is a perfect lead in to EGB. I wish some of the episodes had been written so well. I hope to see more of your work!