roberto182 - Sun Jun 29 9:59 PM PSD
ho man that whas cool

dr.spengler - Mon Jun 2 2:51 PM PSD
the idea's cool!!!! liked it. lets see how it turns up. i'll be waiting........

ghostface - Sun Jun 1 6:20 AM PSD
That was creative. It has potential, but mostly to be crappy.

LordVego - Sat May 24 11:19 AM PSD
I am liking the potential, but I wish this one would have been longer. Good job, though

suvarna_rohit - Sun May 18 11:03 AM PSD
thanks sinister. didnt expect this much for my first story.

Sinister - Sat May 17 8:17 PM PSD
A really interesting start to what can br a great series.