EgonsBabe - Sat Dec 27 6:07 PM PSD
Hehheh, that was cool. Pretty funny in some places. Great work

Gabriel Martin - Mon Mar 31 4:02 AM PSD
No comment about Feminem, and a couple of characters seemed "Out of their element." It was well written, and readable, unlike many fanfics.

mrshowtime3740 - Fri Feb 21 4:35 PM PSD
I like Slim. Good Story. Rap needs work, though.

Vincent Belmont - Mon Jan 6 3:29 AM PSD
I don't like Eminem at all......but this was written well.

Twister - Fri Jan 3 7:06 PM PSD
Stop saying you don't like Eminem v_v

GB Freak - Fri Jan 3 1:54 PM PSD
I don't like Eminem, but I loved the Fan Fic. Awsome Job.

LordVego - Fri Jan 3 12:56 PM PSD
worthy effort...but i told you i dont like eminem

Agent D - Fri Jan 3 11:23 AM PSD
I don't like Eminem at all. He's creepy. But I really enjoyed this story, Twister. Good job.

peter bo - Fri Jan 3 10:35 AM PSD
Could've been better but what the heck, I enjoyed it. The GB rap at the end was pretty smart actually.

PF4Eva - Fri Jan 3 4:48 AM PSD
I didn't think I'd enjoy being that I am not big on Eminem, but I laughed by (bleeping) ass off! (**The (bleep) was a joke**) I wish Eminem was really that cool.