Ectoman - Wed Feb 12 9:10 PM PSD
The story line needs a little work.. but overall pretty good.

NxtGhostbuster - Sun Feb 2 12:10 AM PSD
I give myself the 10. The second installment will not be posted on this site for specific reasons.

MADJesse15 - Thu Jan 9 4:57 PM PSD
Good job NxtGhostbuster! Can't wait to see the next installment in your series.

tubaman21 - Wed Jan 1 8:05 PM PSD
Excellent start. Can't wait to read the rest!

TheMouth - Sun Dec 29 6:50 PM PSD
Nice Job, characterization is good, but they seem a bit flat...especially Peter. Keep up the good work!

mrshowtime3740 - Thu Dec 26 3:13 PM PSD
Nice opening. Great Story so far....

kyleogb1983 - Wed Dec 25 1:27 AM PSD
Great Story, Lynn, I read it last night you did a marvelous job and the chracters are excelenet. Keep up the good work.

Sinister - Tue Dec 24 3:45 PM PSD
Great story, I really can't wait to find out how it turns out!

Texasgb - Tue Dec 24 12:37 AM PSD
Great start Lynn! Definately stays in character. I can tell this will be a great series!!!