Jackalman 99 - Tue May 27 3:16 PM PSD
I didn't understand it and couldn't get what it was about, so I don't like it too much.

GB Freak - Wed Dec 25 10:28 PM PSD
:) you are really good with putting emotion in your stories. Please use that sytle again to tug at the readers emotions.

peter bo - Wed Dec 4 1:09 PM PSD
Brilliant! That story really fiddled with my mind. Could have done with a little more editing work, but who cares. And I loved the bad ending!

Zack - Wed Oct 23 3:21 PM PSD
:(

NxtGhostbuster - Fri Oct 4 11:23 PM PSD
Pretty good, and sad at the end. You also needed to explain in a way why he did that to himself, because

TedFleming - Mon Sep 30 8:51 AM PSD
i was hoping for a happy ending

Dr. Spengler - Sun Sep 29 6:14 PM PSD
Nothing personal against you, Twister, but this is not one of your best stories. I'm not talking about minor grammatical problems. There was little plot, and nothing got resolved. The only point is "don't pick on people." This story needed more plot.

andophiroxia - Sun Sep 29 3:41 PM PSD
Wow. With a little editing work, it would be absolutely perfect. However, this just was a WOW. This was transcedental. Deep. I am just reeling in shock.

Agent D - Sun Sep 29 10:37 AM PSD
Normally, I'd give it ten, but the ending was a tad confusing for me. Otherwise it was excellent, Twister.

kyleogb1983 - Sun Sep 29 8:25 AM PSD
That was excellent, Twister, very sad ending although.

LordVego - Sun Sep 29 12:44 AM PSD
That was beautiful, i actually have to go through the same stuff as him, minus the slits..I love your story.

slimer16 - Sat Sep 28 8:20 PM PSD
I thought it was pretty cool.