boogie138 - Mon Aug 19 6:15 AM PSD
Hey nice story, I really enjoyed it. Keep it up

Bo Holbrook - Fri Aug 16 9:00 PM PSD
I Like It!

Vincent Belmont - Fri Aug 16 5:40 PM PSD
An improvement from the last. I am pleased to see how well this is coming along, Dr. Spengler. You know how hard it is to get a perfect ten from me... Kudos!

Mary Spengler - Fri Aug 16 9:49 AM PSD
Geat story man!! ;)

kyleogb1983 - Thu Aug 15 11:50 PM PSD
Good Form, Dr. Spengler.

Proton_Pack - Thu Aug 15 2:21 AM PSD
I think what makes this story so good is the fact that It shows the life that everone of us wish we could have! and it does so rather well.

Agent D - Wed Aug 14 7:58 PM PSD
Bravo, Dr. Spengler! Your best work to date! The narration and the dialogue were well written and the story was great. I'm still hungry for more.