oringhostbuster - Sun Nov 23 4:37 AM PSD
Good representation of all of the charaters

tibor_goodwin - Thu Nov 7 11:13 AM PSD
ooo i like it.... *applauds*

ViGozer - Sun Oct 20 11:58 PM PSD
honestly, i LOVED it... every second of it. although the end was a tad predicatable, i must admit that i would've written the same thing. keep up the great work. hey, IM me sometime on AIM - The Broken Wire. once again, great story!

beck - Sat Aug 24 9:14 PM PSD
great story exciment all the way thou.

CaptainN - Tue Aug 13 6:37 PM PSD
Great story Ectodude! This sounds like you could mold your character into its own series of novels. Keep it up!!

Master Spider - Fri Aug 9 5:08 PM PSD
I like the first person style of it, it's very well written and a good story...

Kingpin - Tue Aug 6 5:17 PM PSD
Very good, keep up the good writing!

boogie138 - Sun Aug 4 9:03 PM PSD
not bad, not bad at all, interesting story

Dr. Spengler - Sat Aug 3 7:58 PM PSD
VERY good story. Of all of your stories, I wonder if maybe this one, so far, "takes the cheese."