Jackalman 99 - Tue Oct 28 7:54 PM PSD
fairly decent for a ff. Keet at it chum

protoK - Thu May 8 1:03 AM PSD
nice, i think i can sort of see where this is going

GhostBustersIV - Thu May 1 6:49 PM PSD
Very cool ending

GBFan87 - Sat Apr 19 1:51 AM PSD
Good story!

JasminStern - Thu Jan 2 2:36 PM PSD
Very good!

Redskins4life71 - Mon Nov 18 12:48 AM PSD
Great chapter, i liked the ending

tibor_goodwin - Wed Nov 6 12:14 AM PSD
FINALLY. An Egon story. XD Not bad, not bad at all. Wicked cute!

I Luv EgonS - Tue Oct 22 5:27 PM PSD
Good job!

beck - Sun Aug 25 3:51 PM PSD
it is not as good as the 1and 2 but still goos

Dr. Spengler - Tue Aug 13 9:13 AM PSD
Decent. A solid 8 for your effort, no major problems.