cutie03uk - Sun Oct 19 12:54 PM PSD
v good

Jackalman 99 - Thu May 15 3:55 PM PSD
Well written, good character developement. I don't know where you're going with this, so I'm giving it #7, for now.

egb fan - Fri Jan 3 9:41 AM PSD
I gave you 8 for part 2. But this is fairly exceptional. I've decided it does deserve 10 in my opinion after all.

Sinister - Tue Dec 10 3:14 PM PSD
Very Nice!

boogie138 - Thu Jul 25 5:08 AM PSD
egb fan fics are rare, as are good ones, nice

kyleogb1983 - Thu Jul 18 11:42 AM PSD
Good work on this stroy, I wished that this could have been an episode.

Biggsexi - Mon Jul 1 4:01 PM PSD
i agree. i'm going to read the other one now.

Twister - Tue Apr 2 7:44 PM PSD
Very Nice

MasamaBinLaden - Thu Mar 7 9:59 AM PSD
Blöprs... *reps* :))))

Akuma - Sun Mar 3 8:26 PM PSD
Nice.

Glycerine - Thu Jan 24 3:20 PM PSD
Pretty good so far. It held my attention. I'm going to go read the next part now.

HaleyBeth - Sat Dec 15 11:47 PM PSD
It's not bad. I like how you represent the characters, and make them feel real. The beginning's kind of slow, but I believe that's the entire point :0) Can't wait for more.

a ghost called - Sun Nov 18 6:14 AM PSD
not bad very good i like