Card Dreamer - Mon Dec 29 9:58 PM PSD
Very good and pretty well written. The biggest downside was the RGB Boogyman retells. No need to recapp the ENTIRE episodes. Best left to summary. Type this up in DOC format and you can REALLY add to this. GREAT JOB!!

Jackalman 99 - Wed May 14 4:39 PM PSD
I give it 4. Your story was ok but, I thought the bogeyman was a crappy monster.

gb ray - Mon Apr 28 6:15 PM PSD
cool story

Wayne W. - Wed Mar 19 8:49 PM PSD
meh, not bad

Vincent Belmont - Mon Feb 24 7:37 AM PSD
It is well written, but unless it was meant to be that way, the detail is kind of askew, as if it were a kid describing what he saw on TV.

kyleogb1983 - Sat Feb 8 3:18 PM PSD
I like it and you did a good refeerence of the Bogeyman is Back and having the Grundel in the story. I think you did well with the fan fiction.

DrkMgcn399 - Thu Jan 30 5:37 PM PSD
I give myself a ten again since it is still His Return.