Jackalman 99 - Tue Jun 24 6:17 PM PSD
Fair. I like the fact that you told where Brownie legends originated. I checked it out at the library, as I had never heard of this creature. An educational ff, I commend you for the concept. Your writing style is the reason for the #5.

grantgb_2002 - Sat Aug 24 11:10 AM PSD
Not bad at all, Kyle, I like it.

Agent D - Sat Aug 17 3:08 PM PSD
I like the Brownie concept. That was good Kyle!

kyleogb1983 - Wed Aug 7 9:34 PM PSD
Thank you for your rating Ladies and Gentlemen.

Dr. Spengler - Tue Aug 6 12:15 AM PSD
Not bad. You have a lot of potential, and I'm looking forward to you writing more in the future. A solid 8, I would say.

boogie138 - Sun Aug 4 1:28 AM PSD
not bad see as its your first fic, the reason it got a 7 is that the story didn't develop very well, sure it was short but if you put more detail and character development, the story could progress better. then i would rate it better