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Are You A God?
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The Flowers Are Still Standing!
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Whoa! Nice Shootin' Tex!
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Death Row (Part 4)
Written By: egb fan
Kelly had been unnerved by Kevin's sudden disappearance, as she had been too occupied with her young charges to see him leave. However Lucille soon told the girl that her companion had left the park - she couldn't say why - so Kelly thanked her and then took the kids to the ... more
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Jackalman 99 - Thu Dec 4, 2003 10:15 AM PSD
Like your story but, not the pairings. I can't see Egon taking up with Janine or anyone, nor anyone EVER taking up with Eduardo. But, it's a good read.
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earthwalk - Sun Nov 23, 2003 11:40 AM PSD
A quiet ending without any overblown nonsense. I love how your stories melt into the rythm of life, now that's what I call depth. More closure would've been nice(esp. about the Riveras) but this gives a nice sense of realism. Maybe in future stories?
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johnbrown - Fri Nov 14, 2003 9:41 AM PSD
Real bad ending to a good story. I would have given it a 1, but I've read worse, so I give this a 3.
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Veedramon - Mon Nov 10, 2003 6:30 PM PSD
More superior work. The ending avoids the semi-inevitable shoot out, and also nice tie-ins to "Grief Is Not the Suez Canal". Keep up the good work!
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cutie03uk - Sun Nov 9, 2003 3:36 PM PSD
a good endin 2 a great story. i enjoyed it alot!
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