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Are You A God?
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The Flowers Are Still Standing!
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Whoa! Nice Shootin' Tex!
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New Ghostbusters: Summer School
Written By: Agent D
The summer had been going well for the New Ghostbusters. There were no paranormal disasters that threatened the security of the world. There were not many cases at all and seeing as how they weren’t broke, the NGBs were enjoying it. Sadly, their carefree summer only had a ... more
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Biggsexi - Fri Aug 23, 2002 11:22 AM PSD
I thought it was great... Keep up the good work.
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Dr. Spengler - Sun Aug 18, 2002 12:56 AM PSD
Good, yes, but I'm really lost when it comes to your characters...Dan and four other GBs AND Dan's other friends, and I'm having a hard time distinguishing between any of them. Work on characters and eliminate clutter. Story=great. NGB=strong series.
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Agent D - Sat Aug 17, 2002 6:26 PM PSD
This was fun to write. I really like this one. I'll see if I can work on the "he/she said" thing, Vince.
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Vincent Belmont - Sat Aug 17, 2002 4:13 PM PSD
Very good as far as spelling and grammar. The only thing that got to me was the "he said, she said, he said....etc." A decent work, however.
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kyleogb1983 - Sat Aug 17, 2002 1:35 PM PSD
Great Job, Agent D., try making them go up against the Bogeyman, or Samhain, or the Grundel.
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