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[I can't think of a title for this yet, but this is to be my last update of this thread]
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PF4Eva
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Joined: Apr 28, 2002
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 Posted: Jan 03, 2003 4:32 AM
UPDATE: V-Day, 2003:
http://www.ghostbusters.net/disscussion/ghn/5/111012/
I got tired of updating this thread, and also, I didn't want there to be two different threads about my GB/Night Court crossover. 
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PF4Eva
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Joined: Apr 28, 2002
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Posted: Jan 05, 2003 3:38 PM
Chapter two is now up. I hope it is longer and makes more sense than chapter one. I will attempt to make each chapter better than the previous. I'm not sure how many chapters total, because I've only written the first two, submitted both, and had both uploaded.
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peter bo
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Joined: Oct 01, 2002
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Posted: Jan 05, 2003 5:46 PM
Chapter Two made more sense but Spider-Man hasn't really done anything yet. I trust that the next chapter will be longer and more interesting
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PF4Eva
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Joined: Apr 28, 2002
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Posted: Jan 05, 2003 8:01 PM
You've got it, P. The third and final chapter will make a lot more sense and be a whole lot longer than the first two chapters combined. And trust me, Spidey's gonna have a lot more action in the end. I just submitted it, so in a couple more days, it'll be up.
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PF4Eva
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Joined: Apr 28, 2002
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Posted: Jan 06, 2003 1:01 AM
My Final chapter to Slimer-Man is up (Man, that was fast! )
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Sinister
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Joined: Jul 05, 2002
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Posted: Jan 07, 2003 6:01 PM
A Britney crossover? Is that a gud idea? *sighs* Not stopping you...
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Kingpin
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Joined: Aug 17, 2001
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Posted: Jan 08, 2003 10:51 AM
I hate to break it too toy, but how you've described what Spidey does is a little bit unrealistic *I will edit when i read more* For instance, you have spidey webswing from the Empire State to Times Square. Firstly TS is'nt right next door to the ESB, it's several blocks away so he'd have to shoot several weblines to get there, second Spidey would shoot at a specific building. Times Sqaure is made up of several buildings: The Virgin Megastore, Toys 'R' Us, Number one Times Square (The old NY Times Building) and several different buildings. Also, even if Britney knew of the GBs, she probably isn't a fan and Spidey is infamous in NYC, JJJ has mad Spidey a wanted man, most people hate or fear Spidey.
*more to come*
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PF4Eva
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Joined: Apr 28, 2002
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Posted: Jan 09, 2003 6:50 PM
Kingpin, that's why it's called a fan fiction. 
Anyway, I had a long delay, but I'm back on m'computer, ready to write up the Britney/GB crossover, but I really don't know how to start it, though. I'll also need title suggestions for it.
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Chad
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Joined: Jul 14, 2001
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Posted: Jan 09, 2003 6:58 PM
Please revise and resubmit your Coach crossover. I was enjoying it until I discovered something distubrbing about the "basketball coach". 
I think you get the hint and I look forward to seeing a revised version. 
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Kingpin
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Joined: Aug 17, 2001
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Posted: Jan 09, 2003 7:11 PM
I understand it's a fanfic, but there must be some realism in mind when writing.
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"We have the tools, we have the talent"
The sun never sets on the British Empire...because God can't trust us in the dark! evil grin
Nightsquad gets chatting
Egon and Janine forever! Everything else is wrong
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PF4Eva
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Joined: Apr 28, 2002
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Posted: Jan 09, 2003 9:03 PM
Chad, I deleted the Coach crossover and replaced it with the Britney one. But I'll try and make a better storyline. At least I haven't submitted my Britney crossover yet, because I describe her dressed as Dr. Frak-N-Furter at the VMAs, which she was at the time. But I will work on it, maybe make it a short, pointless, one-part crossover.
Anyway, I was trying to add some humor into the Coachj crossover. But you'll be impressed with the revision, Chad.
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PF4Eva
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Joined: Apr 28, 2002
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Posted: Jan 11, 2003 2:02 PM
This time, I'm guessing it's the use of the words "Foxy Lady"? Come on, gimme a break, it'a a Jimi Hendrix song. 
Alright, I'll keep trying and trying till this Britney thing gets approved. I'm not stopping on this one as I did Coach. I'm devoting the rest of my life to this crossover making approval.
I have rewritten/fixed everything that might prevent approval. Got rid of even the briefest, non-descriptive love/sexual reference (When I ref'ed Foxy Lady, that's Hendrix, y'know? Nevermind.), typed Ray's name correctly, etc.
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Chad
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Joined: Jul 14, 2001
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Posted: Jan 11, 2003 4:24 PM
As I stated in an email to you, I'm going to use my editorial powers for the first time and disallow Britney Spears crossovers.
Sorry, but it's just something I don't want on this site. There are many other fan fiction sites out there that would love to have it.
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Sinister
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Joined: Jul 05, 2002
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Posted: Jan 11, 2003 4:27 PM
*Breaths a sigh of relief*
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PF4Eva
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Joined: Apr 28, 2002
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Posted: Jan 11, 2003 5:13 PM
So I have found many sites that might possibly consider a Britney/GB crossover. So now, I've got to think of another cool crossover idea that is bound to work on this site.
How about:
GB/Exorcist
RGB/Rugrats
GB/ALF
GB/Spy Kids
RGB/Simpsons
GB/Osbournes (No profanity except for "(bleep)")(Probably wouldn't work, though)
I need some of your ideas for crossovers that haven't alreayd been done.
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Sinister
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Posted: Jan 12, 2003 10:39 AM
Simpsons or Osbornes get my vote.
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