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Sword of Ruth--Critique and commentary
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andophiroxia
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 10, 2002
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 Posted: Sep 11, 2002 2:58 AM
Hello!
I just put up a three-part installment story on the Real Ghostbusters Fanfic. It's called Sword of Ruth. Please read it, rate it, and tell me what you think!
So far, a lot of people that I have sent it to, have loved it. I warn you it has adult language and some situations, but it is not smut or anything like that. All language I felt, was entitled and applicable to the characters themselves. So please, let me know how I fleshed them out and what I could do better in. Also, I would love to answer any questions about format, characters, and stuff like that.
Thanks!
Andophiroxia
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PeterVenkmanFan
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Joined: Jul 15, 2001
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Posted: Sep 11, 2002 11:08 AM
I just wanted to say even though you already know this, that I loved all three parts and look forward to more if there is more. Very well written I think.
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"Strange, weird, eccentric, sick. That about covers it."
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Chillin with Pete in The Yahoo Peter Venkman Fan Club
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andophiroxia
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 10, 2002
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Posted: Sep 11, 2002 11:55 AM
Thanks, man 
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NetSolo
Moderator
Joined: Jul 15, 2001
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Posted: Sep 11, 2002 5:35 PM
Oh man, me and my dyslexia... I saw Ruth and Cri-- and immediately thought Ruth Chris... mmm steak...
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andophiroxia
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 10, 2002
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Posted: Sep 11, 2002 11:48 PM
Whhhhaaaat!?!?!?!
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vgirl
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Joined: Jul 16, 2001
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Posted: Sep 26, 2002 8:40 PM
That's our Net.
I thought your stories were great as I told you before and they're intense. Just one thing, you might wanna do a little light editing to the story. But otherwise, good job.
Maybe I missed something but didn't you only just hint that more goes on than what you wrote? I think it's good enough for me, with the obvious exceptions.
BTW- Some of the gang and I've been joking about our 'similar coincidence' the gang from the site, that is. Well good luck on the next story you churn out, I'm sure it'll be interesting.
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You been hangin' with Peter too much, man.
Ghostbusters '86
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The Peter Venkman Fan Site - in process of moving in, again!
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Kingpin
Ghosthead
Joined: Aug 17, 2001
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Posted: Sep 28, 2002 7:25 PM
I liked them, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Egon and Janine forever! Everything else is wrong
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NxtGhostbuster
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Joined: Sep 05, 2002
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Posted: Sep 29, 2002 12:43 AM
I think you released your fourth part of your series, did you not?
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andophiroxia
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Joined: Jul 10, 2002
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Posted: Sep 29, 2002 7:18 AM
No not yet. I will, however release it when I have introduced some more of the characters in this play of sorts.  However, be on the watch for more stories, they will include the same people!
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