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Vincent Belmont
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 Posted: Sep 05, 2002 11:40 AM
I hope you enjoyed the first part....the 9.6 rating it's sitting at feels pretty good.
I'm in the middle of part 2, and all 3 ghostbusters are in the city. I have a bit of writer's block at the moment, and I'm opening the floor to any input you may have.
Feel free to make some suggestions about what you'd like to see happen in the story. Any ideas that I like, I'll toss in.
I await your suggestions...
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Dr. Spengler
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Joined: Jul 25, 2001
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Posted: Sep 05, 2002 2:55 PM
Sorry Vince, I got nothing...looking forward to it, though.
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Twister
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Posted: Sep 05, 2002 7:28 PM
Sorry Vince, I got nothing....I'd need a bit of detail beofre I could give you any suggestions.
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Thomas MacNEIL
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Posted: Sep 06, 2002 5:47 PM
Well Vince, I'm curious as to what part of the story you're stuck on. Does it have anything to do with the tragic scene at the end of part 1?
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Kingpin
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Joined: Aug 17, 2001
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Posted: Sep 06, 2002 5:53 PM
IF it helps you can use parts from my Ghostbusters/Resident Evil crossover.
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Vincent Belmont
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Joined: Jul 17, 2001
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Posted: Sep 07, 2002 11:11 AM
Vince, Gabe, and Winston have reached Raccoon City on foot.
The streets are deserted, and people have locked themselves indoors. RPD roams the streets, seemingly searching for something. I'm looking for very generic suggestions to spice up the story.
Here's one I just got that I decided to add:
Near the end of the story, when the town is in pieces, the team runs into Alice from the RE movie on their way out of town.
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*"Vincent Belmont is never late...nor is he early. He arrives PRECICELY when he means to."
*"They say one should not speak unkindly of the dead, so I say "Nice Try."
*"There are worse things out there than ghosts, goblins, demons, aliens, and things that go bump in the night....there's me...."
*"Bah. Carlos? He's half an idiot....and that's the GOOD half."
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Shadow_weaveR
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Posted: Sep 07, 2002 6:56 PM
sorry cant help ya vince im stuck on my own story right now  but I cant wait to read this one!
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Agent D
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Joined: Jul 09, 2002
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Posted: Sep 07, 2002 7:53 PM
I wouldn't throw in Alice from the RE movie. Just stick to regular RE. I don't have any ideas either. I do suggest that the GBs' equipment be malfunctioned when they enter Raccoon City. If they had their packs no zombie would really be a threat.
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Vincent Belmont
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Posted: Sep 08, 2002 10:40 AM
A good suggestion about the equiptment, and was already considered.
As for Alice, I've decided to keep her, since she only appears for 2 paragraphs near the end of the story, as the 3 are driving out of town, and nearly hit her while she's running around in her hospital gown and a shotgun.
Gabriel: "Jeez...she doesn't feel a draft? I always hated hospital gowns."
Winston: "Hey, man, don't spoil it for the rest of us...she don't need to know."
Vincent: "Don't worry, I wouldn't DARE tell her anything. She does have a shotgun."
Essentially, she turns down a ride out of town.
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*"Vincent Belmont is never late...nor is he early. He arrives PRECICELY when he means to."
*"They say one should not speak unkindly of the dead, so I say "Nice Try."
*"There are worse things out there than ghosts, goblins, demons, aliens, and things that go bump in the night....there's me...."
*"Bah. Carlos? He's half an idiot....and that's the GOOD half."
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Agent D
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Posted: Sep 09, 2002 7:15 PM
Well, I love the dialogue, Vince. I can't wait for part 2.
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Ectodude
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Joined: Aug 04, 2001
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Posted: Sep 26, 2002 10:04 PM
ive got an idea. for the equipment malfunction, why not have the internal coolant system be shot one of the packs, and the others just not work? they could have one semi-working pack, but should have to be shut down to be cooled after a couple of minuets? whats a GB story without at least a little pack action, even if it was small?
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Vincent Belmont
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Posted: Sep 27, 2002 1:32 AM
I was also thinking of either:
1) Umbrella getting ahold of the equiptment, or....
2) Hunters getting ahold of them, tearing up the electronic equiptment.
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*"They say one should not speak unkindly of the dead, so I say "Nice Try."
*"There are worse things out there than ghosts, goblins, demons, aliens, and things that go bump in the night....there's me...."
*"Bah. Carlos? He's half an idiot....and that's the GOOD half."
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Kingpin
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Posted: Sep 27, 2002 6:38 AM
It's even possible that there might be some ore material buried under Raccoon that interfears with the proton ignition system.
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Vincent Belmont
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Posted: Sep 27, 2002 8:16 AM
Hmmmmmm........
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*"Vincent Belmont is never late...nor is he early. He arrives PRECICELY when he means to."
*"They say one should not speak unkindly of the dead, so I say "Nice Try."
*"There are worse things out there than ghosts, goblins, demons, aliens, and things that go bump in the night....there's me...."
*"Bah. Carlos? He's half an idiot....and that's the GOOD half."
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Kingpin
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Posted: Sep 27, 2002 8:26 AM
an idea Mr. Belmont?
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"We have the tools, we have the talent"
The sun never sets on the British Empire...because God can't trust us in the dark! evil grin
Nightsquad gets chatting
Egon and Janine forever! Everything else is wrong
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Vincent Belmont
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Posted: Sep 27, 2002 8:31 AM
If you answered me THAT quick....you should sign on AIM. 
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*"They say one should not speak unkindly of the dead, so I say "Nice Try."
*"There are worse things out there than ghosts, goblins, demons, aliens, and things that go bump in the night....there's me...."
*"Bah. Carlos? He's half an idiot....and that's the GOOD half."
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