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Could you guys give me some ideas please? (Updated....sent in)
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Twister
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Joined: Jul 16, 2001
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 Posted: Jun 01, 2003 2:17 PM
K, I, once again, have a severe case of writer's block. I have an idea for a story that mostly involves Deja Vu. I have the beginning worked out, but I can't swing the rest of it, so I'm hoping you could give me ideas as to how to involve the GB's....please  Help help help help! 
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Lion-O
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Joined: May 18, 2003
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Posted: Jun 02, 2003 6:49 PM
Well they could see something happen with ghosts like the end off the world kinda thing but it didnt really happen and so they have to try and stop it, i was gonna do a story the same as that with a character i invented called Michael Richards who has a brain disorder and can see things other people cant so the GB could use his help!!!
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Twister
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Joined: Jul 16, 2001
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Posted: Jun 02, 2003 8:26 PM
Good idea Lion-O! (don't worry, I won't do it like what you were gonna do, it'll be different but it might be somewhere close) Thanks! 
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Agent D
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Joined: Jul 09, 2002
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Posted: Jun 02, 2003 9:15 PM
Hey, Twist, how about you do a story where the GBs are in Deja Vu situation and don't know it, but as the story progresses they realize the situation. Then in order to break out of the cycle, they have to prevent something from happening. Something like that
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Twister
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Posted: Jun 03, 2003 8:16 PM
Wow.....I'm really confused at the moment But I've started the story and whatever happens...will happen I guess. I have no idea how it'll go or work out, I guess ya just have to wait
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Agent D
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Posted: Jun 03, 2003 8:18 PM
Dang it...I'm so impatient
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mellie
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Joined: Feb 23, 2003
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Posted: Jun 03, 2003 9:07 PM
Agent D's idea sounded like a familiar movie....lol....with a familiar guy......lol...
It sounds like a cool idea Twister, There's a glitch in the Matrix....lol...j/k
maybe you could have it so only one of the guys picks up on it...and keeps trying to tell the others, but maybe they don't believe him. As it goes along, the other guys start noticing small deja vu's, seeing a cat walk by twice....or something little like that.....then they eventually believe the one who saw it all, and figure out why(i don't know why...lol) then ya know...the usual...etc etc...
That's my input....hope it helps
Good Luck!
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Agent D
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Posted: Jun 03, 2003 9:43 PM
Mellie was able to put into words what I was getting at.  And yeah, my idea does seem reminsicent of Groundhog Day, but Murray's character didn't really have to do anything in particular to break out of the cycle. It just happened that way. I can't wait to read your story, Twister.
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mellie
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Joined: Feb 23, 2003
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Posted: Jun 04, 2003 12:24 AM
lol...okay....so there ya go, I really hope it helps you out. Can't wait to read it! Let us know when you eventually get it finished
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Twister
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Posted: Jun 04, 2003 8:23 PM
lol, well, I'm afraid you'll have to wait...a while longer than expected. I'm not liking how it's turning out. I love the beginning but that's about it. But never fear, Twister will figure it out! *runs off with a cape on*
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Twister
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Posted: Jun 08, 2003 12:09 AM
Alrighty then! She's in people! Well, the first part anyways! It's called "Deja Vu: The Power of Zen" And I must say that I am very pleased with it so don't ruin my day and give me bad ratings!!!
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