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Ghostbusters 4: The War Of Eden
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Sinister
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Joined: Jul 05, 2002
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 Posted: Apr 18, 2003 2:33 PM
At the dawn of time, there was a place... This place was known as the Garden of Eden, it was a paradise for God's most precious creatures...
The bible tells us much, but after translation and the wear of years, it's true meaning has been lost! What it fails to tell us is that teh Garden was not just a paradise for the creatures we know... angels and other angelic beings lived there... and unlike what we are led to believe... Eden was not in this world! It was it's own world.
It was a a perfect world that held the very stuff of life, and it was always peacful... until one day, a creature of evil entered...
This creature disguised itself as a serpant, and was on a quest to cast down Gods most precious creation... Mankind.
The serpants evil plan was a sucess, but it was ot without consequence on itself, at the same time as man was evicted, the seprant was cast down to earth aswell...
On earth it waited, plotting its revenge... and now in the second millenium of Christ, it is time for the serpant to take its revenge...
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2008- Five years after mans triumph over Lucifer...
The Ghostbusters continue to protect the world from the phantom menace that threatens our existence every day...
We join our heroes, Rupert Thompson, John Hawk, Roland Jackson, Garrett Miller, Kylie Griffin, Eduardo Rivera, Egon Spengler and Ray Stantz as they battle to take on the new evil which is destroying our eco system...
Ghostbusters 4: The War Of Eden
Coming Soon
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The resident scribe for GHOSTBUSTERS UK
GB DOOMSdAY, a crossover event unlike any other!
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Agent D
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 09, 2002
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Posted: Apr 18, 2003 2:36 PM
Interesting, Sinister. Keep me posted!
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Ghostbusters N.O.M.A.D. House Sitter
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"Howdy, Vakesh! Meet Winona!"
*smack*
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GHSTBSTR_GURL
Ghosthead
Joined: Dec 10, 2002
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Posted: Apr 18, 2003 4:12 PM
Sounds awesome!!! I can't wait to read it. I know it will be great because all your stories have kicked butt so far. Let me know when it comes out.
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DO.... Ray...... Egon.....
"Valentines Day. Bummer."
--Venkman
"I couldn't help it. It just popped in there."
"What. what just popped in there?"
--Ray and Peter
"Ray has gone bye bye Egon. What have you got left?"
"Sorry Venkman I'm terrified beyond the capacity for rational thought."
--Peter and Egon
VISIT MY GB SITE!!!
http://www.geocities.com/ghstbstr_gurl
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peter bo
Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 01, 2002
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Posted: Apr 18, 2003 4:31 PM
Sounds cool!
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Proton_User
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 24, 2002
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Posted: Apr 18, 2003 6:30 PM
Keep us updated sinister!
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we nuke the spooks that won't stay dead...We stop things going Bump in the night...We are Ghostbusters:West Coast Division
"i can either be insane or Eccentric its your call... but i have to be rich to be eccentric so that makes me insane!" - DR Robert Griffiths
"I'm thrown in with a bunch of bloody lunatics." - DR Robert Griffiths
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click here and be amazed!
GB:west division NEWS thread
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Sinister
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 05, 2002
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Posted: Apr 18, 2003 8:02 PM
Well, I started it, and just to give you a teaser...
The first part (like the librarian scene in GB1) is set on board a US Naval submarine!
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The resident scribe for GHOSTBUSTERS UK
GB DOOMSdAY, a crossover event unlike any other!
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Kingpin
Ghosthead
Joined: Aug 17, 2001
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Posted: Apr 20, 2003 7:51 PM
Sounds cool Sinister.
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"We have the tools, we have the talent"
The sun never sets on the British Empire...because God can't trust us in the dark! evil grin
Nightsquad gets chatting
Egon and Janine forever! Everything else is wrong
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Sinister
Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 05, 2002
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Posted: May 01, 2003 7:51 AM
Well, work is continuing on it, and I can guarantee that it will be every bit as good as my last one!
Here's a snippit: Please remember, script format is not brilliant in a post... when ever you see (name) in brackets it meens the next text is something NAME is doing. Thanks
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INT. SKY ABOVE OCEAN-DAWN
Familiar Ghostbusters music plays, a pristine condition white transport chopper flies overhead. There is a close up on the original “No Ghost” logo on the side as it passes by. The side hatch slides open, and two men in their late 20s can be seen standing in the gap, their identities are currently indistinguishable, they are wearing black flight suits with the classic “no-ghost” logo on their right arms. They are both wearing parachutes, attached to their belt is a rope leading to a black bergan. The two men kick the bergans out of trhe chopper and jump. They begin free falling and open their parachutes. The two men land on the SUBMARINE’s deck. They unclip their parachutes and stand up. Their faces can be seen, they are Rupert Thompson and John Hawk, Ghostbusters.
(RUPERT and JOHN)
They bend down and pull open their bergans, inside each is a proton pack, ghost trap and PKE meter. They both pull on their equipment and take their proton wands in hand.
JOHN
(Looks at Rupert)
You’ve gotta say it, I wouldn’t change jobs for the world!
JOHN grins broadly, RUPERT grins back.
RUPERT
Agreed! Now let’s nuke this spook!
(RUPERT)
He unclips a radio of his belt and begins to speak into it.
RUPERT
Dr. Stantz, this is Thompson, we’ve landed successfully on the sub. Over.
RAY STANTZ’s voice comes through over the radio, the camera zooms in on RUPERT’s face, John cannot be seen.
RAY
Great! Now remember guys, we’re not too popular with the military at the moment, so be careful, ok?
RUPERT
Of course, we’ll be totally…
RUPERT is cut off by a loud explosion, he spins around to see a broken sub marine hatch, blackened and smoking, close to it is JOHN, pointing his recently fired proton wand at it… The wand is emitting light smoke… RUPERT mouths the word “Why?” at John.
(JOHN)
He grins broadly, and shrugs.
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The resident scribe for GHOSTBUSTERS UK
GB DOOMSdAY, a crossover event unlike any other!
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evil_toaster
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Joined: Oct 05, 2002
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Posted: May 04, 2003 1:18 AM
Whoa.
I love it!
The concept is pure genius. Where else would they go after defeating satan himself?
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Why are you reading this? GBN's closing in 20 mins. Go read something more important, like the farewell thread. Really. Come on people, stop reading my sig! Right now! I mean it! Ah, what's the use, damn yuppie larvae...
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