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THE ECTOPLASMIC STRUGGLE - Part IV: The Final Struggle (Adanced Preview...)
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peter bo Ghosthead

Joined: Oct 01, 2002
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Posted: Mar 31, 2003 6:02 AM
It's been a rather long wait, but i've finally submitted Part III of The Ectoplasmic Struggle!
It's shorter than the first two, but remember, it's the 'calm' before the 'storm'!
With Vince's absence it'll probably be a while until it shows up, but i hope you won't be disappointed!
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byronghost05 Ghosthead
Joined: Nov 04, 2002
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Posted: Mar 31, 2003 10:17 PM
I am happy that it's back. Long live THE ECTOPLASMIC STRUGGLE!
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Zack plaese Email me!
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peter bo Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 01, 2002
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Posted: May 17, 2003 7:34 AM
Well, since Sinister and Kingpin have taken over fan fic approving duties it should be up very soon ... hope you all enjoy it!
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peter bo Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 01, 2002
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Posted: May 20, 2003 4:37 PM
IT'S UP!
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peter bo Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 01, 2002
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Posted: May 27, 2003 4:49 PM
Coming soon . . .
Soon, I will begin writing Part IV of the trilogy. I understand that some of you were a little disappointed with Part III, but Part IV is gonna be fantastically fantastic!
I've already worked out the perfect ending - which may remind you of the 'Burly Brawl' in The Matrix Reloaded!
Well, I'll keep ya updated . . .
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Sinister Ghosthead
Joined: Jul 05, 2002
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Posted: May 27, 2003 6:02 PM
part 4 of a trilogy........
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The resident scribe for GHOSTBUSTERS UK
GB DOOMSdAY, a crossover event unlike any other!
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peter bo Ghosthead
Joined: Oct 01, 2002
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Posted: May 28, 2003 5:13 PM
Here's a little advanced preview...
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The Ghostbusters are in Ecto-1, making their way back to the firehouse. The only problem is that they have to go on the freeway to get there. As you might have guessed, the traffic is terrible.
“We could really do with a plow right about now!” Peter says, “Not only would it get us back faster, but the carnage would be awesome!”
Winston looks in the rearview mirror. A police car is racing along at a very high speed, yet its siren isn’t turned on. Winston keeps watching as it races past. After getting past, it suddenly stops right in front of them. Ecto-1 screeches to a halt, barely avoiding contact.
“What the hell do you think you’re doing?” Winston yells out, getting out of the car, “I could have crashed into you!”
Someone appears out of the police car’s sunroof. His hair is as white as a cloud. His face as black as the darkest, deepest places of man’s domain. In his right hand, he holds a machine gun. His left is not visible.
“Are you Winston Zeddmore?” he asks, his voice surprisingly high-pitched.
“I might be. Who are you?” Winston replies.
The man coughs into his left hand, and then holds it up above his head. Everything seams normal, until his whole hand melts away. Winston stares in shock. A few seconds later, a new hand grows from the man’s wrist.
“My name is Kastrabo. I come with orders from my master, Upa. I stole this vehicle so I could find you.” He explains, “My orders were clearly written on my chest, in my blood.”
The other Ghostbusters get out of Ecto-1, now feeling rather impatient.
“Winston, what’s going on?” Ray asks.
“I’m not quite sure.” Winston replies, and then turns his attention back to Kastrabo, “What are your orders?”
Kastrabo holds up his machine gun, his finger on the trigger.
“Kill, in the order I was given, Winston Zeddmore, Peter Venkman, Ray Stantz, and Egon Spengler!”
Winston takes a step back. He looks over his shoulder, and realizes that the others are already back inside Ecto-1.
“If there are no objections, I believe I will kill you now!” Kastrabo says, taking aim.
“Well, I have an objection.” Winston replies, shaking in fear, “I’m allergic to being shot!”
“Ha, too bad.”
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Well, there ya go.
What dya think?
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Kingpin Ghosthead
Joined: Aug 17, 2001
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Posted: May 29, 2003 1:43 PM
Looks cool Euan
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Nightsquad gets chatting
Egon and Janine forever! Everything else is wrong
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